Horatio

Me and my lovely brother were thinking about Horatio ,Elek's pet, and we thought that he could be some kind of lizard that turns into a tiger-sized dragon. Ratio can breath fire but it is like a cold fire that can turn into ice and fire at his will. It also only spreads as far as he wants it to. We haven't figured out a color or what kind of lizard yet, but he is helping me brainstorm.

As we were thinking of what animal Ratio would be before he turned into a dragon, my brother (lets say his name is J.W.) said, "How 'bout a hamster! And his fur could like, meld into its scales. But wait. Then he would be turning from a mammal to a reptile."
If you would like to leave some suggestions feel free to.

Elek Description

Name: Elek Matthew Dravor
Age: 13
DOB: September 24
Hair: Brown/Spiked
Height: 5' 4"
Eyes: Blue/Green
Mother: Brionnia Caladina
Father: Mark Dravor


Description: He is very active and likes to roam around Marion with his best friend, Vanessa. He was born in Marion, but his mother was pregnant with him when she left the human world. He has a named Horatio( Ratio ). He is very good with a sword, and helps Kemary on her quest.

Kemary's Sibling

Okay, I've decided that Kemary will have a little brother named Elek Matthew Dravor, but he will live with his mother. He will also help Kemary on her journey. He is about 13 and has dark brown hair. I will describe him in more detail later.

Description of Kemary Dravor

Name:Kemary Anne Dravor
Age:15
DOB: June 18
Hair: Long/Wavy/Black
Heigth: 5' 6"
Eyes: Green
Mother: Brionnia Caladina
Father: Mark Dravor
Description: She is a very active, fun girl. She is a bit of a tomboy. She loves soccer. She likes to hang out with her best friend. She dosen't know her mother. She is in 9th grade. She dosen"t have very many friends.

Any other suggestions?

First or Third?

Hello all of my wonderful readers! I have hit a predicament. :( I am wondering what person I should right it in? First or Third? Please help!

The Plot (so far)

So far as I have figured, this book is about Kemary Dravor, a 15 year old girl who has never known her mom. Her dad tells her he will tell her when she is sixteen, but his plans are cut short and he must send her to Marion, her mother's falling world. She must save her mother Brionnia Queen of Marion; her father,Mark Dravor; and all of Marion before the solar eclipse in a week or her mother's world will be ruled forever by the most evil, powerful wizard in a of Marion, Maldimor. The only way to do this is to find the sapphire scepter of power,once held by the most powerful of her bloodline. On the way she meets a various assortment of friends to help her on her journey.
Well that is what I have thought of so far. If you would please put your suggestions in the comment box below I would be very happy. Thank you.